GlitterxDaze

So,, I know this might come off as rude or inconsiderate sine we don't even know each other *clears throat nervously*. But I'd like you to check out one of my stories and give me feedback. 
          
          I saw some of your comments on stories and they captured me, you are actually a good critic and I would love if you found the time to give me some criticism which am most sure I need. 
          
          this is the link : http://www.wattpad.com/story/16039562-you-only-live-twice
          
          And am really sorry if I annoyed you or anything :D