I read your dollhouse fanfic and I'm disappointed it doesn't have what I like in a fanfic, firstly your character doesn't really fit in you follow the story of legacies too much Ana doesn't hold on to anything and she's angel still in the end just watch the series legacies by adding sentences from Ana she doesn't change anything to the story for example she should beat the monsters have a personality change the chronology enough to make it a new story with a real romance! Here it is legacies with just an inlay this is my opinion!
