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from a distance, i thought that your profile pic was of someones head with a bun that looked like pingu.

Also maybe add more tags if you want more people to read it 

Okay I just read it. I really like it, I think one thing that you could do so add more depth to your story is add a flashback explaining how they've met and how long they've known each other etc. 

I can try sure! I'm not very good, but I will look at it.