Shivani901

Hi, I am a new reader and wanted to share my work with you hope you will like it and read it in your free time but if it somehow offends you I am sorry about it. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/314806574?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Shivani901&wp_originator=QZe9fbpMGRJHi0PAJyG1SZM0z5xyW8T29an5Eo93EiKTWPmf7UmplYKyncWDm1HYpQcfHriRJ%2B5WPlsHvMjJcCvjOt%2BQsw5rWElm77t6Ze7j3vuGZamv5Wntblf10iv8

movingdildo

@ Shivani901  you're welcome love.
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Shivani901

@Shivani901 thank you for the comments and I will try to follow your suggestions they helped me understand my shortcomings. Thank you for the precious time you have spent on my work I really appreciate it.
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movingdildo

I apologize I didn't answer earlier, I forgot to give you a response when i saw your message. Thank you for your support, I'll make sure to leave a few comments in your works.
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HimeNora

Hello. Hope you're doing fine.
          I just devoured REBORN: It's time to shine.
          I really like it despite some big inconsistencies between the Canon version.
          I may have left some brash comments, I apologize. Despite that I really like the story. Hope I will get to read more of the Healing Queen's stories.

movingdildo

@ HimeNora  I appreciated your honest comments where you corrected my information.
            It might've been not the most consistent plot as I've wrote most of the chapters long ago and wanted to keep it the same as it was. I just corrected the grammar mistakes I found when re-reading it. 
            And Naruto is so damn long, we can't always have accurate information about everything and we're not always in the mood to Google every little thing. 
            Thank you for your support, I will make sure not to disappoint with my next chapters.
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