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do we love the new cover yall??

would yall be interested if i wrote about them just chilling in the phantom dimension? 
          
          i feel like the only bonds mia has right now are with ashlyn and ben and i wanna develop her relationship with other characters too (and i feel like if i just followed the original story there wont be many opportunities for that)
          
          im also starting to enjoy writing conversations and banter (except the 'he said' 'she said' part but if i just avoided that then i wont learn how to write it yk) 
          it would also feel empty? baseless? forced? when she does some of the things i have planned out (no spoilers)
          
          and it prob wont be something meaningful and deep- theyre just teens who are trying to have fun with all the things going on
           
          !! ill leave it in only if i think it came out good so theres no guarantee im just wondering what yalls take on this is (i lowkey have some ideas alr so its probably in the next chapter) 
          
          im also getting ZERO comments lately and going crazy over that like PEOPLE this is OUR project DONT LEAVE ME HANGING - i need some feedback be it good or bad
          
          I NEED SOMEONE TO RESPOND PLS (a simple 'i read all of this' would suffiice please and thank you)

im having problems with my phone battery so if i disappear and theres another acc saying that theyre me in my notes - it prob is me

just so yall know im rereading my previous chapters cuz im not sure if i said anything specific about mias backstory and since shes going to have a conversation with ben (and aiden? maybe? i havent really planned out the whole thing just the skelet of the hangout so we'll see abt that. for now im just going with the flow) soo in case it goes naturally with the conversation i wanna have it right and avoid any plot holes (im regretting not writing anything down in my notes -_-) ANYWAY im changing some things along the way as well as fixing some mistakes i had taken a notice of (in the future, when reading the chapters feel free to point out any spelling mistakes, as well as wrong usage of some words since i dont really know english by the book (?) i picked up on most things from tv shows and movies so it would be appreciated, it would help me not make the same mistakes)
          all in all, im having a wave of motivation so this should be done by the end of the week (i somehow got a hold of my fav vape brand that had gotten banned in serbia and am on cloud nine)
          ALSO no major changes have been made so u dont have to reread anything, but ur free to do so if u want 
          i didt realize that the majority of the comments would get deleted and im kinda bummed out by that but ehh whatever ig, no changing it now
          
          if yall couldnt tell i love ranting on these comments as well as at the end of every chapter soo yea

okay so, i feel like i owe u guys at least this much for your support through my book
          First of all, im doing really bad in school and am not managing my work well at all so even though i tried i really haven't had the time to upload from all the studying 
          Adding to that, the winter break starts on december 27th so ill start writing again - which doesn't mean that ill upload immediately (i wanna have at least four chapters done so that i have more wiggle room later on in contrast to until now, cuz im just now realizing how much i fucked up with uploading multiple times a week)
          Lastly i wanna say that i appreciate any kind of comments- it shows me that you're invested in something im spending my time on (soo, not to bribe yall, but it would def keep the motivation going
          All in all, love yall and sorry for such a long hiatus 

ATTENTION EVERYONE 
          
          i wanna do some filler chapters, and i really have no ideas for the group hangouts. i wanna build the bond between the characters so pls write your request down here!! (i wanna write some tyler and logan, as well as ashlyn and aiden moments so u arent limited to only mia and ben)
          
          the requests will be open from now on until i say they aren't anymore so don't think its too late to suggest something if u have an idea. be as specific as u can  (cuz, as i said before, i rlly dont have any ideas of how the hangout could go and what they could talk about)
          
          +i wanted to write about the pool and cooking hangouts from red's insta page so tell me if u would be interested in that
          
          ill prob add this in the next chapter for those who aren't following me but for those of u who are pls respond, any kind of feedback helps me out a bunch

yall, i finished the third chapter of comfort, should i post it or wait till friday? keep in mind that i cant guarantee ill have the forth done till firday

thx for the follow and voting on my book, I rlly appreciate it :)