MelonSnail

Hi! MelonSnail here!
          
          I just started writing my first book and I would appreciate it so much if you could check out my first and second chapter. I will try to update the next ones as soon as possible:)
          
          https://my.w.tt/A4Mqb8E7k5
          
          Aa this is my first book and I'm also not a native English speaker, I would really appreciate some constructive criticism if possible.
          
          Have a lovely day and stay safe with corona going on!