mrLancholic

Well I just wrote a story that takes 15 seconds to read lol 
          	Can anyone help me define exactly what a poem is, as opposed to a short story?  I know they don't always rhyme, but I don't know whether or not they all have a rhythm.  Thanks!

mrLancholic

Well I just wrote a story that takes 15 seconds to read lol 
          Can anyone help me define exactly what a poem is, as opposed to a short story?  I know they don't always rhyme, but I don't know whether or not they all have a rhythm.  Thanks!

mrLancholic

The feelings I'm feeling right now remind me of lemonade on an Autumn day.  I can taste both the bitterness and sweetness of it.  It feels like my heart is drowning in Salt water.  I can feel the same pressure enveloping my heart.  I can't be sure what I am feeling, but it is definitely bitter sweet...

Satsuki_Jae

Sorry i felt a LONG and LOTS of messages over there about my feelings. I know. I shouldn't have done that,huh? But yeah, thats all....

Satsuki_Jae

@Kimjaenelle yes thank you for understanding
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mrLancholic

@Kimjaenelle No, it's not your fault.  They might have viewed it as "hurtful", but in the end you were just stating your view and opinion.  It would've been differebt if you had called her names and made false accusations, but as far as I can see you weren't trying to hurt anyone.
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