alic315

I love 'my broken luna' and I was wondering if you would help me with my first book! I'm kinda nervous about posting it, so far there's only a chapter up and I'd love some help with improvements? The book's called 'simplicity' ; would you be able to have a quick read and see what I could add to make it better? It would be great if you could! Especially since you're so talented! Thank you in advance (even if you don't have time to help! (I'll completely understand if that is the case!))

mrielaaaa

Hello
            Thank you so much for reading my story, it really means a lot to me and I would love to help with your story as much as I can just tell me how, though I don't know why you chose a rookie author like me to help you I'm so sorry because I took too long to reply I only checked my wall last night and I wanted to reply to you when I finished updating my 3rd chapter
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