mrsfallonridley

For every chapter, I have a verrrrry detailed outline. Because my chapters tend to run long and I write the scenes out of order, I give each scene a title so I can easily locate them on the long Google Doc. When I publish the chapters, I remove the scene titles because I don't like how they look in the middle of the chapter. However, and I have just realized this, some of the titles are funny and give a look into the chapter without spoiling anything. So... I thought I would share the scene titles I came up with for the next chapter! Just for the fun of it.
          	
          	Here is "Mar 13, 2026: New York" - “The Guy On The Chiefs meets his sons” 
          	
          	Scene 1 - Game Plan
          	Scene 2 - The Farewell
          	Scene 3 - The Suite
          	Scene 4 - Rising High
          	Scene 5 - So Long Labor
          	Scene 6 - Arrowhead
          	Scene 7 - Duking it Out
          	Scene 8 - Afterglow
          	Scene 9 - The Very First Night
          	Scene 10 - Kingsley’s Court
          	Scene 11 - Kelce Brothers
          	Scene 12 - Breaking Point
          	Scene 13 - New Hope
          	
          	As you can see... Yes, it's gonna be very long.
          	If this is something you'd like me to keep doing. Let me know and I will gladly share the scene titles before each chapter.

mrsfallonridley

@-BLISSFULREADS Well, I think you might have been paying attention to the clues ;) I swear Kingsley’s Court is the most random name for what it is… I don’t know what I was thinking!
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-BLISSFULREADS

This makes me so so excited! I feel like the first few titles are pretty self explanatory but they seem to get trickier haha. Arrowhead is definitely Arch being born and Duking it out will be the birth of Duke, for some reason this title makes me feel like he’s gonna cause a few bits of trouble coming out haha, maybe even born with his hands by his face like he does in ultrasounds. The next few seem exactly what they say but Kingsley’s court has me stumped. I can’t wait to find out!!
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mrsfallonridley

@anideaofsorts ‍♀️ that makes sense. Let's hope I can write this thing asap so you find out what it is about!
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mrsfallonridley

For every chapter, I have a verrrrry detailed outline. Because my chapters tend to run long and I write the scenes out of order, I give each scene a title so I can easily locate them on the long Google Doc. When I publish the chapters, I remove the scene titles because I don't like how they look in the middle of the chapter. However, and I have just realized this, some of the titles are funny and give a look into the chapter without spoiling anything. So... I thought I would share the scene titles I came up with for the next chapter! Just for the fun of it.
          
          Here is "Mar 13, 2026: New York" - “The Guy On The Chiefs meets his sons” 
          
          Scene 1 - Game Plan
          Scene 2 - The Farewell
          Scene 3 - The Suite
          Scene 4 - Rising High
          Scene 5 - So Long Labor
          Scene 6 - Arrowhead
          Scene 7 - Duking it Out
          Scene 8 - Afterglow
          Scene 9 - The Very First Night
          Scene 10 - Kingsley’s Court
          Scene 11 - Kelce Brothers
          Scene 12 - Breaking Point
          Scene 13 - New Hope
          
          As you can see... Yes, it's gonna be very long.
          If this is something you'd like me to keep doing. Let me know and I will gladly share the scene titles before each chapter.

mrsfallonridley

@-BLISSFULREADS Well, I think you might have been paying attention to the clues ;) I swear Kingsley’s Court is the most random name for what it is… I don’t know what I was thinking!
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-BLISSFULREADS

This makes me so so excited! I feel like the first few titles are pretty self explanatory but they seem to get trickier haha. Arrowhead is definitely Arch being born and Duking it out will be the birth of Duke, for some reason this title makes me feel like he’s gonna cause a few bits of trouble coming out haha, maybe even born with his hands by his face like he does in ultrasounds. The next few seem exactly what they say but Kingsley’s court has me stumped. I can’t wait to find out!!
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mrsfallonridley

@anideaofsorts ‍♀️ that makes sense. Let's hope I can write this thing asap so you find out what it is about!
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mrsfallonridley

Thinking thoughts... What do people think about massive chapters?
          I'm at 21k words before editing. Do I cut scenes and post them as one shots later? Do I publish it all in a single 21k chapter? Cut it down completely? No one is reading a 21k chapter?  TLDR? The struggle is real.

mrsfallonridley

@etabacchi ahaha me thinking that is how we get into these situations 
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mrsfallonridley

@MeghanHoehn Noted!! Still need to edit the gibberish I wrote but I will drop it really soon!
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mrsfallonridley

@ferbaltazar_ your English is perfectly fine!
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mrsfallonridley

SHE SAID YESSSSSSSS!!!! I'm so happy for our girl!

mrsfallonridley

@etabacchi I’m not sure I am ready so 
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etabacchi

@mrsfallonridley Angst  i can't wait but idk if i'm ready
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mrsfallonridley

@etabacchi well, I have started writing it but it's kinda angsty and I'M SO HAPPY right now. No idea when I will in the mood to keep writing it... Probably not this weekend. Then next weekend I'm gonna be traveling, so not sure. I will probably post in the middle of next week! So before the Chiefs season opener!
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mrsfallonridley

I finished writing the new The Guy On The Chiefs chapter, I was gonna edit and publish it on Monday, but then Taylor Swift decided to announce her new album and go on New Heights, and so now I'm not able to properly function until we know exactly what's happening! I'm SO excited!!!

mrsfallonridley

@MeghanHoehn Just watched that podcast episode and it was GOLD inspiration to see them interact for 2hours. They are such a normal couple. It’s insane how in love they are… I think it was exactly what I needed…
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MeghanHoehn

So relatable! I love the excitement she always brings to her announcements. It’s just so fun here. Excited for your chapter when you post it though! 
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TaylorSwiftFan8713

@mrsfallonridley same and by later i meant some time next week if i can focus enough to do that
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