nenevada
its been 5 minutes that im wheezing and pissing my pants at your comments. ISTG YOURE HILARIOUS
mrsmmalfoyy
@nenevada (IKRRR I LOVE ALL THE SLYTHERIN BOYS I JUST COULDN'T FIND ONE OF DRACO'S WITH ALL OF THEM IN SO I THOUGHT WHY NOT WRITE ONE that's how i started writing btw) righhttt soooo the boyss are blaise's bestfriends since childhood cuz their parents are friends, evangelinw didn't get along with the boys at first. seeing from my perspective, i didnt find it confusing cuz i knew what i was writing, but your right when i consider it now, it IS actually confusing in the story description i had mentioned about oc getting along with blaise's bestfriends so i thought that'll be helpful enough I'll make sure to edit the AN chapter to add that part thankyouuuu
nenevada
HIII, I just read ur first chapter. i REALLY love the way you write, it’s captive! also I really like the way she’s blaise’s sister its very different from other fanfics where she’s usually Harry’s sibling. some parts are confusing, but it’s the first chapter so it’s totally normal and it’s supposed to be confusing. ILL KEEP READING TONIGHT!!
nenevada
ur so available and nice I love that. its rlly minor minor details, like when they get all introduced to her suddenly (by the way I LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT ALL THE SLYTHERIN BOYS IN OMG AAAAA), its blaise first year too so how do they know already each other and all, and maybe I would’ve kept the first pov the whole character because from third it’s suddenly confusing. BUT ISTG ITS SO GOOD ONLY LITTLE STUFF, I read one chapter and I love it already, tonight ill continue definetely
mrsmmalfoyy
@nenevada thanks for the feedback!! would you perhaps let me know what parts were confusing, so i can reckon fix them?? love you lots
nenevada
hey!! im writing a draco x reader fanfic, it’s only 6 chapters for now and takes place in the third year, if you ever have time I’d love an opinion from you!! tysm if you will
mrsmmalfoyy
@nenevada lol it's alright, i understood the mistake '?!' your most welcome, i guess I'll continue with your story as I'm free from workkkk btwww make it a happy ending plsss
nenevada
OMG I just noticed I said “ofc??” And not “ofc!!” that wasn’t mean im sorry . BY THE WAY, I put in the author notes to clarity they are not related but you’re right I should put it aside on the first chapter too. THANK YOU SOP MUCH!!!
mrsmmalfoyy
@nenevada ayyyy, just read the first chapter of your book! I loved it so much also, I was wondering if I could give you a thought; many fans consider the fact that the blacks and the Malfoys are kind of related, as sirius is dracos uncle, so perhaps it would be a good idea to add as a side note at the end of the first chapter for the readers telling them to assume they are not related??? idkkkk I always ignore that fact while reading black × Malfoy bookksss lots of loveee I'll read on more!!