Hey! Your annoying seat mate is giving you 2 tips and more in the future.
Here are my nonsenses:
1- Whenever a certain character speaks, do not forget to write " before and after the sentence. It might cause misunderstanding for your readers. An example: Don't do this: I do not care about it! He snapped.
Instead do this: "I do not care about it!" He snapped.
2- When a sentence ends, do not give space to the word and period. Starting with the new sentence and the period spaced away is good. An example: Don't do this: He stalked out of the room, bursting the door open as he reached the doorknob and closed the door with a thunderous effect .
Instead of doing that do this: He stalked out of the room, bursting the door open as he reached the doorknob and closed the door with a thunderous effect.
