I agree with the comment before mine, Miss A.
Your story truly deserves recognition and so do you as its author. Ang ganda ng structure, maayos yung flow ng plot, and the characters feel so real and well-developed. But what stood out to me the most is your use of language, it’s refined, expressive, and carries the emotional weight of each scene beautifully. Honestly, kaya nang makipagsabayan with some of the well-known sapphic stories put there kahit first story pa lang. I really hope more readers in the community get to discover this because your work deserves a much wider audience.
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