muddledportraits

I know. I know, I am late. there is no excuse for my delay. I was stuck on the plot for a while. I will make a double update this week, please forgive me :) I hope I will be forgiven enough to get few votes and comments, I am kind of missing the motivation here guys :(

EmzemBlue

@muddledportraits I do like the third person, but I think first person would also be interesting.
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muddledportraits

@emmalynburri : do you think it would have been better if the story was written from Jessi's point of view rather than the third person narrative that it currently is. 
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muddledportraits

Oh thank you!! You are my favorite person right now ☺️
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muddledportraits

I know. I know, I am late. there is no excuse for my delay. I was stuck on the plot for a while. I will make a double update this week, please forgive me :) I hope I will be forgiven enough to get few votes and comments, I am kind of missing the motivation here guys :(

EmzemBlue

@muddledportraits I do like the third person, but I think first person would also be interesting.
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muddledportraits

@emmalynburri : do you think it would have been better if the story was written from Jessi's point of view rather than the third person narrative that it currently is. 
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muddledportraits

Oh thank you!! You are my favorite person right now ☺️
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makomck

Hi! Just wanted to say I love your story about the suicide notes and the journalist. It's very interesting and well-written, I can't wait for you to update it! Would you perhaps even check out my main story (the one titled Capitol) and tell me what you think? I'd appreciate it!

muddledportraits

Thank you so much for reading my story..  I will definitely read yours and let you know my comments.. keep writing!! 
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