muffin35bbh

I know I mentioned posting but what time is it for everyone because someone has already read 2 of the ones I posted on and for me it's late at night almost 12

muffin35bbh

I don't know if I should continue any of my books 

muffin35bbh

@I_L0v3_ra3nd1ng I updated it and I'll try to update every week to every other week 
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I_L0v3_ra3nd1ng

@muffin35bbh u should continue the transfem leosagi book! It's honestly a really good book!
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muffin35bbh

Should I even continue my book the game?

muffin35bbh

@LovingReadsSam sure but I need inspiration 
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LovingReadsSam

@muffin35bbh maybe...can you continue tranfem leo?...
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muffin35bbh

Have you read it
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muffin35bbh

I need help I want to get my girlfriend a gift but I'm broke and live halfway across the us
          

muffin35bbh

I've been good 
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Cutie_4Me

Virtual gift? And I didn’t know you had a gf! Congratulations! How have you been?
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muffin35bbh

Quick question for anyone that reads my books what am I doing wrong with most of them other then the one that has 1.12 thousand views none of them are really liked and I want to change that so I will take criticism and advice 

muffin35bbh

I personally struggle with that because I struggle with spelling in general but I take the feedback and I will make adjustments 
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StarC00ki3

@muffin35bbh I think the stories themselves are good. But in my opinion your issue might be the format. I’ve read a lot of great stories here with a crap ton of views but little to no likes or comments, and the one thing they all have in common is that the entire chapter is all one strung together paragraph. And that some of the sentences don’t start with capitalized letters. 
            I know wattpad makes it hard to properly format, especially if your writing somewhere else first and shifting the drafts over, but my best honest suggestion it to just have the paragraphs be more defined.
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muffin35bbh

I've been good 
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