Aleya

Hey there !  Would you be able to read a story of mine? [Ignorance At Its Best]

Hi!!! 
          I wanted to ask you if you could read my story - hot blood turning cold - and tell me what you honestly think by way of commenting or voting. It would be a big help but I understand if you don`t have the time. 
          I would of course return the favor if you want me to. I hope you like it 
          Much love!!! <3 <3 <3 

I know these messages can get tiresome; but I'm going to ask anyway. I have a new story called 'Andalucia Rising' up. 
          
          The year: 2418, Planet: Andalucia. Some 140 years ago A group of scientists approved and experimented with genetic manipulation. The results: Enhanced offspring that get more powerful the older they get, recieving more abilities every new generation. What happens when the enhanced hybrids decide to rise up from the oppression of the experiment? And how will the Scientists try to control them... 
          
          It's up for a watty award so would appreciate any and all feedback I can get. I'd really appreciate it if you could give it a look, maybe read it all if you like the prologue, vote if you like it and comment if you have any advice. 
          
          Thanks a lot
          Gina
          
          PS - I'd be willing to return the favour. Just leave a comment on any chapter to show you looked and send me a pm with which one you want me to look at. 

Thanks so much for adding me as a fan!!! (  3

thanks for becoming a fan!!!! I majorly appreciate it :)

Hey. I'd appreciate it if you can read my story. It’s called "Mason Maine...there's just nothing else to say." Please comment, vote, or even fan if you like it. Thanks

@shellpaperheart im reading your story right now and @xiaomage94 @iheartmyfriends @AnonymouslyKnown  i will read your stories after 

HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real"
          
          Its my first time writing a story,....so please comment,fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks                        
          

hey. 
          i was just wondering if u could take a look at my new story, Harewood crescent? it's about this girl who loves music and she goes on this music trip and falls in love with a guy called steve.But when tradgedy strikes she doesnt know if she really can fall in love with angel.... 
          so pleaz vote...comment? maybe become a fan??? 
          its not finished yet bt all my friends love it and say its really good. 
          i know these can get annoying bt its the only way i can get peeps to read it. These things dont stay on the whats new page for any long. thanks, Amy (: 

@Celestial i have nothing but time cause its summer
          @shellpaperheart and i shall read your story after ^