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Promoting my story “RACE” share with a friend or vote for it yourself! 
          
          Involves superhero’s and LGBT rep. What could possibly go wrong when four teens are in a house together... a lot. With their new power comes great responsibility some are not ready to take on. Find out more in my new novel “RACE” today!

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Thanks so much for reviewing my blurb on the 'Share the FIRST paragraph of your SciFi novel.' I really appreciate your input and will take a look at that beginning dialogue, I agree, it's a little rough right now. 
          
          I didn't want to break the flow of the chain, so I'll just say here that I thought your story has a great start and I'll definitely continue reading Heavensborne! I loved the Martian and Pirates of the Carribean, so it's definitely up my alley!!
          
          Thanks again! 
          <3 Foss