mummajay3

I must apologise to all my readers, sorry I haven't finished or updated her Alpha for a while. Unfortunately I've been having some mental issues lately that has made it hard for me to write.
          	I can't say when I'll have the story finished, but I'll try my hardest.
          	Thank you everyone ( ◜‿◝ )♡

lkrk21

@mummajay3 yahhhh, you did it pretty dirty, like most of the chapters was really good she was a potential Luna, strong and you showed her breaking shackles from others standards but from  chapter 28, she became someone like very submissive and weak. Like I know she should be partially but for me it's too much. Also their lovey dovey scenes got me cringed, it's just too much. PLEASE I hope you make it much better. I really felt disappointed by that and thought that I just wasted my time on what I thought was a gem but was just a rock.  Sorry not Sorry but please take it as a constructive criticism. Just felt  like it suddenly became really cliché.
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QueenJellyJello

It is alright. Our health whether it may be mental or physical is the most important. You shouldn’t give that up for anyone.
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mummajay3

Thank you both for your sweet words it means a lot to me (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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lkrk21

@mummajay3 yahhhh, you did "her alpha" pretty dirty, like most of the chapters was really good she was a potential Luna, strong and you showed her breaking shackles from others standards but from  chapter 28, she became someone like very submissive and weak. Like I know she should be partially but for me it's too much. Also their lovey dovey scenes got me cringed, it's just too much. PLEASE I hope you make it much better. I really felt disappointed by that and thought that I just wasted my time on what I thought was a gem but was just a rock.  Sorry not Sorry but please take it as a constructive criticism. Just felt  like it suddenly became really cliché.

mummajay3

I must apologise to all my readers, sorry I haven't finished or updated her Alpha for a while. Unfortunately I've been having some mental issues lately that has made it hard for me to write.
          I can't say when I'll have the story finished, but I'll try my hardest.
          Thank you everyone ( ◜‿◝ )♡

lkrk21

@mummajay3 yahhhh, you did it pretty dirty, like most of the chapters was really good she was a potential Luna, strong and you showed her breaking shackles from others standards but from  chapter 28, she became someone like very submissive and weak. Like I know she should be partially but for me it's too much. Also their lovey dovey scenes got me cringed, it's just too much. PLEASE I hope you make it much better. I really felt disappointed by that and thought that I just wasted my time on what I thought was a gem but was just a rock.  Sorry not Sorry but please take it as a constructive criticism. Just felt  like it suddenly became really cliché.
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QueenJellyJello

It is alright. Our health whether it may be mental or physical is the most important. You shouldn’t give that up for anyone.
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mummajay3

Thank you both for your sweet words it means a lot to me (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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mummajay3

I want to apologize to all who have been reading her alpha, I haven't been in the right mental state to finish it off...but I will hopefully have the story completed by the end of June. 
          Thank you to all who have been patient with me, you all are the best 8-):-D

Azozothoth

I am looking for a idea for a story to write. Something with a fantasy and romantic spark. Could you possibly give me any ideas? Asking as a friend

Azozothoth

@mummajay3. Story is almost completed. And I took some inspiration from some other writers. I'll let you know when it's done.
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mummajay3

@Azozothoth that sounds pretty good, I hope you followed through with writing it...sorry I didn't reply only just noticed...I would definitely read your story ^_^
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Azozothoth

@mummajay3 I was thinking about a all powerful angel who has lost everything. He finds happiness in a innocent girl accused of witchcraft.   Is that a good idea or no?
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CherlyCenteno

Ok so I have read not his first mate now 2 times and all I can say is wow it was amazing and also I need to know how Xanders and lilly relationship started like i need the back story like help it's eating me up. I love him more than his brother but i need to know how they came to be involved those 5 years ago what happened that this 2 need up doing the do. Is she his second chance mate like i got questions. I love the book a lot wouldnt change it but i 200% would read Xander and Lilliana story.