Luramina7
Your book Sommer's secrets is actually pretty good, however I would like it even more if it had some more meat on it's metaphorical bones if you know what I mean. For example on chapter six you probably could have written enough for three chapters if you had expanded upon your ideas and added details like a combat scene or maybe what it was like during the time they rode the Pegusai. Anywho that's just my opinion and I'd really enjoy reading more of your book! Thanks for the upload. :)
munchycrunchy
@Luramina7 Thanks for the follow and the feedback! I will see what I can do about that. I kind of stopped writing because I ran out of ideas, but since summer's started, I feel I have all the time in the world to think about the rest of the story. LOL
