@music_addicted_
Guys i will have 2 parts in my book, but I have a bonus character, tho it won't be focused on the 2 main couples. (....gl.....)
Well maybe yes but not really.
What should I do i don't want to finish this but I have stories planned so I need to finish.
Bye guysssss
Kisses and hugs from me
Hey so if anyone follow my story and wonder why haven't I posted.
Im going through a time, not bad allways but I lost people and I feel bad for talking and stuff.
Im so so so sorry I couldn't post and I will post this weekend I hope.
I just felt like I needed to have my own time, and I realy hate everything that happened today (dont worry, im fine. Just tired and a bit scared)
I hope you will wait for my story cuz I promise I want to finish him and to have more stories. So if you read this. Thank you for reading, cus it lights up my day. Sending love to you all.
Also a ballad by lykn might actually help you know? And its written by tui? Hello? Why is the ballads allways coming out when I need them .
Kisses and very deep hugs from me. I will come back soon. ❤️
@ SweetyKim3 thank you. Feeling a lot better now, but I have 2 exams and im so tired and my sleep schedule is basted
@music_addicted_ Hey, take your time, okay. You matters more than anything. Sending you lots of love & strength ❤️
See I read your stories you write well but your scenes are not clear which can block the emotions you want to convey .
I am not a good writer ,I just use trick to make my writing better.
I suggest you to take help of ai tools which can make your scenes clear . I mostly use chat gpt they also help to improvise scenes as you want just state how you want it , they can also give new ideas .
for example the starting i improvised just have a look
Est Supha the Third was known by many names.
But the one that followed him everywhere was The Never-Smiling Prince.
And honestly… it suited him.
He had lost his parents at a young age. His older sister had vanished without a trace. And soon, the weight of the crown would rest on his shoulders. A kingdom waiting. A throne demanding.
Smiling had never felt important.
Hong, Est’s personal knight, was the only one who still believed there was hope left in him.
“Your Majesty, you can’t keep listening to grampy all the time,” Hong said gently, a small teasing smile playing on his lips — a smile that came so easily to him. “You have to do something about it.”
Est exhaled quietly.
“Hong… I know you care about me,” he said in his usual calm, almost detached tone. “But I’m hopeless. I can’t smile — not even if my life depended on it. Perhaps the universe is simply cruel.”
And with that, the conversation ended.
The only place Est ever felt remotely like himself was the rooftop of the left wing of the castle. High above the court, the expectations, the whispers.
He went there every night.
It was quiet. Honest.
Free.
But one night, he wasn’t alone.
“Oh… Your Majesty? Didn’t expect to see you here!” a voice called out cheerfully.
A boy stood near the edge, the moonlight outlining his figure.
“The name’s William,” he added casually, as if speaking to a normal stranger and not the future king. Then he tilted his head, studying Est’s face. “What’s wrong with it?”
Est blinked.
“My face?” he asked, a faint pout tugging at his lips without him realizing.
“Yes,” William replied, narrowing his eyes dramatically. “I can’t see your smile. Usually when I meet someone, they smile at me.”
“I don’t smile,” Est answered simply.
William stared at him for a long moment.
“…That sounds like a challenge.”