Hi, I'm Janaki. I posted my first story "Bruises", and I was hoping you could give it a read. It's a short story and I would really appreciate it if you let me know what you think!
P. S. I find that on publishing my story on Wattpad, some sentences have become disjoined, or repeated, and other such errors. But I'm not sure if it's just me. Can you help me out?