The last part of 'The End of a Life That Never Existed' has just been published. It's a short story so not very long! Please read and give me some feedback:) I may change a few things.
Hi! So... thinking of changing my story a bit:) I've got great comments on the first chapter so I don't think I'll change that but from then onwards the comments aren't so good so I was wondering if anyone would like to help me change a few things? I'd like to appeal to as wide of an audience as possible:) Please post any changes or criticism or anything at all that will help me improve my book. Thanks!