hi! im a new writer and im looking for feed back to improve my work. i would really appreciate it if you read my books! if you are interested here is the link:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/13252207-the-fire-in-her-eyes -> Fire in her eyes
please read and spread the word! if you do then ill do the same for your books!
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The Fire In Her Eyes
This is the story of a girl named Ash who's life is far from normal. Ash contains amazing powers that normal...