I want to use this app as an opportunity to get feedback and improve. feel free to be as harsh as you want. but preferably it would be constructive criticism. tell me what you liked, hated, or just felt indifferent about but you can see it improved.
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Story by mxaxs Zero
Jailbreak
Setting: wild west + magic
An attempt at flash fiction about a man trying to escape his captors.
(Note: It is...
