myfakelife69

Just a heads-up: I haven't started writing since the last chapter. I'll get back to it after the World Cup, so I probably won't be updating this month. Now let's all hope Portugal win... because if they don't, you'll probably be waiting even longer ;-;

jamie_harp

@myfakelife69 that is literally how i feel too, except i want England to win.
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myfakelife69

@jamie_harp It's my country, but it's not coming home this year. My head says France, but my heart wants Portugal to win.
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jamie_harp

@myfakelife69 lol i love that, and Ronaldo, but i want England to win.
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jamie_harp

do you still think its not coming home?

jamie_harp

Give me your socials and find out.
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myfakelife69

@jamie_harp You always this straightforward?
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jamie_harp

lol give me your Instagram or Discord.
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myfakelife69

Just a heads-up: I haven't started writing since the last chapter. I'll get back to it after the World Cup, so I probably won't be updating this month. Now let's all hope Portugal win... because if they don't, you'll probably be waiting even longer ;-;

jamie_harp

@myfakelife69 that is literally how i feel too, except i want England to win.
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myfakelife69

@jamie_harp It's my country, but it's not coming home this year. My head says France, but my heart wants Portugal to win.
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jamie_harp

@myfakelife69 lol i love that, and Ronaldo, but i want England to win.
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myfakelife69

I've edited chapter 2. Rowan's mention of the Ophelia painting and the 'Rose of May' metaphor are actually important to the plot later on, so please take a look when you can. I keep getting these ideas right as I'm falling asleep, it's wild how the story keeps evolving, even if it is a total nightmare to actually piece it all together.

myfakelife69

@samirahc0002 well thank you, that means a lot but no, i was really just asking because, yk, Rowan doesn't like him and she probably won't like you either for that reason lol (she's actually crazy). i only added the art as like a personal touch (and because Ophelia's gonna be really important later on). I'm not hating on people who like Picasso or anything. i personally love John Millais' art more, and i wouldn't even say i hate Picasso, the two are entirely different artists, Picasso's art just isn't really for me.
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samirahc0002

I have seen his art and it is very captivating and emotional was your writing inspired by him ? because it is truly a work of art.He changes the flow and style of his pieces just like you when you add and tweak certain chapters.Seemingly,love to mirror his style
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myfakelife69

@samirahc0002 Do you like Pablo Picasso's art?
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myfakelife69

I should probably say this, but I go back and reread chapters sometimes and tweak things. So if you've already read one and come back later, it might be a little different. Nothing big or plot-related, just small stuff like pacing, dialogue, monologue or description. It's mostly me trying to get the character's voice right. Sometimes I'll read something back and be like, yeah… they wouldn't say that, and fix it. I have a really specific voice for Rowan, so if it's not hitting, I'll go back and adjust it.
          
          Also, I edited chapter 7 today (mostly the beginning, up until Camilla walks off) and chapter 8 a bit. That one actually matters because I added something about a dog Allison had, so it might be worth rereading the start, the part where Rowan's being a perv over the photos.
          
          The dog comes up again later in chapter 21 when Rowan talks about Allison's sister, that part's kinda in the middle of the chapter. Read it!