Era-Vera
Do you like to read a story about magic academies, ancients times with kings and servants, sibling hood, cute and possible ship pairing, and magic users?
WELP, I hope you can read my story then! It's called:
The Secrets Of The Eternal King
Hehehe, I only made the prologue for it, because I started a few days ago, but I'm looking for some feedback on how it's like. You can be harsh or kind about it, I don't really mind. And could you tell me if the story thus far hooks people in?
One day, I hope that this book of mine turns into a light novel and hopefully, an anime I can work and create, and I will strive to become a better author!
mygentallullaby
@ThoughtsRuleTheWorld im sure u can do it ^_^ looking forward in what u have in mind!
Era-Vera
Actually, I have a good plot so far, but I'm actually very frustrated because it seems too similar to FMA:B, but hopefully, I can come up with a different explanation that doesn't seem like that!
mygentallullaby
@ThoughtsRuleTheWorld ill read it and give ya some feed back but what u said there seems pretty interesting! Have u figured out what u want ur story to do and end?
