Purple Purpose

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Hey can you critique my story?

Saw your critique advertisement and noticed yours was the only one that required the least "payment" and promises an in-depth critique compared to the handful of other ads I saw.
          
          I'm grateful if you can critique my story. PM me the critique please. It's just a prologue and the first chapter. I might upload the second chapter by the time you are done with the queue though, so please look through that one if I'm faster in uploading.
          
          Also, it's a science-fiction and fantasy story. Hope that doesn't throw you off too much. Thanks.

Yes, but it will take time, I have this person before you first.

Hey, could you critique my only book? Thanks. :)

Haha, thanks for viewing the video. It was for a site called Team Backpack. He didn't make it though so that sucks.

Could you critique my short story, Error 451? (: