oxwallflowerxo

Heya! I hope this isn’t annoying but I’d love it if you could check out my below story: 
          
          It’s only the first section of the book but I just want some constructive feedback ♥️
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/249120568?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=oxwallflowerxo&wp_originator=T236AXkYWA3eP73QGNZRWi%2Fuz2Q1wgj0YvkVbQ0mSMBO4cZFO16v6U0ts1ijB6p%2BriS2o%2FjY%2Bk6ptOhgEag2SoptRag4vj1nQt9tKDA5g7QeFFse6vdO1lxjqUad6RhM