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Olá, poderia dar uma olhada nessa obra? 
          
          LINK: 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/343552407?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=nvayumi&wp_originator=8oGkNRNVQoqHFxQGQ0EK8JaJ9taYjVgKPLd5HuuPHb3IWUtBLZARXZoMPPepXZL3p0UDAgo0zCfb%2FbY4sdVYj8TnHWTR5eRMzP9BEJejZUa6gpDl3c5f0HnWtabR2DaU
          
          ㅡ Agradeço desde já e peço perdão se estiver atrapalhando!