mybumisbetter

Shurrup

Would love a second opinion on my new poem. If you have the time can you plz check it out??
          
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/GzJgVaY0ax

Heeey,could you read my history https://www.wattpad.com/story/80722471-in-love-with-a-weirdo-boyxboy, I hope you like and oh my god,your background I'm laughing hard here!

itch my bum an I itch urs

Tank you for follow 
          

Why do you not believe me?

u lik new pic ? it a mustashe

so u no my story. i bet u dont no my life. go read poems. my poems espesshaly.

como tu te llama yo no se
          de donde llegaste ni pregunte

cuanto dolor y mira cacular lo grande que el mar