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@nazzu1 About Rohit not saying sorry yet — that is intentional. I don’t want apologies in my story to come so easily, especially after the kind of mistakes he has made. “Sorry” should be felt and earned, not just spoken casually.
            
            And about Virat not addressing Rohit’s wrongdoings — I am going to write that part. I just haven’t reached that point in the story yet. The characters will get proper development, and nothing is being skipped.
            
            Honestly, I don’t know how it looks from outside, but I never wrote this story to prove whether I am a Virat fan or not.or I am a rohit fan or not i just person who loves cricket as Indian I’m simply writing the plot the way I imagined it.
            
            It also seems like my writing or story doesn’t match your expectations, and I’m genuinely sorry for that. I should have labelled the story more clearly from the beginning. I’m sorry if it felt like your time was wasted. I hope you find stories that suit your taste better in the future.
            
            And just yesterday I was talking with my friend about quitting this story, but after hearing everything now, I think I should at least try writing further. Whether it turns out good or bad, I’ll still gain experience — even if it’s a bad one or a good one.
            

@nazzu1 Hey, thank you for taking the time to explain things. I really am willing to improve my story when someone gives feedback in a clear and respectful way. I understand that you actually read my chapters, and I appreciate that.
            
            I know my writing isn’t perfect and my story also has a lot of flaws — I’m really trying to improve. I’m a huge Taekook fan myself, and I’ve read Bounded and loved that book 
            
            I don’t mind changing things or fixing parts that feel toxic or misleading. If someone explains it properly, I will always try to work on it. But lately some comments I got were very harsh, and instead of feeling like feedback, they felt like people wanted to force changes on me or were calling my writing bad. I know it's bad it's my first time writing but  That honestly made me feel a bit attacked, so I didn’t know how to respond.
            
            I agree that I should have labelled the story properly from the beginning, especially since some readers might find certain parts toxic. I’ll keep that in mind and improve that part as well.thanks for saying that.
            
            Thank you again for sharing your point of view. I’m trying my best to grow as a writer, and I hope you understand my side too.
            
            Have a good day 

@mymoonimagination new chapter also instead of improving you did what you did till now showing rohit non chat about his deed even after realising his deeds he didn't ask for sorry once didn't made efforts and Virat even without getting proper sorry of efforts from rohit side give him chances and even nullify one duck yes that kane reaction was duck still ignored that 
            Dear sorry but this clearly indicate my be that book written on your book to criticize was right you have personal bias that's why Rohit's every deed is whitewashed never called out by anyone nor even Virat properly and justified under his past his control and feelings while never showed Virat standing up for his insults even in latest chapter Virat never mentioned the character assassination rohit did nor he waited for rohit to take steps first apologies and then making efforts then giving him 3 chances 
            
            Surely your response to critism is in good way but your are not implying it on your new chapters nor changing anything

@SoniSingh984 I was just making a few corrections, that’s all.dont worry I can also write specifically for one person if he wants to read what I’ve written,and if ever want to Stop writing this story I'll inform beforehand.thank you for reading anyway

@mymooimagination I am curious that's why I am asking,no pressure at all

@Ananya013 here ?

@mymooimagination umhm that I will. But first of all let's talk on insta. Give me your I'd 

@Ananya013 here?

@BabitaPatel5 Do you like this story so far? I know my writing and the story might not be perfect, but I’m really trying. Thank you so much for reading.
            

@_kabuu_ Hey, are you still reading my story? Do you like it so far?
            Because I’m honestly thinking about quitting this story.