mymothernamedme

@viviancwrites OK then I'll try to message you by Thursday the latest :D

vcw226

Hi there. I was reading your Must-Reads critiques and I was wondering if you'd read my story "Strawberries & Cigarettes" and give me some feedback. I'm sort of in this mindset where I think I'm moving things too fast, or I'm dragging it on, or the chapters keep getting worse... I don't know. A critique would really help me figure where I'm at. Thanks in advance if you can. I completely understand if you can't, though.