mynaemisboo
Should I continue my story? ;o;
mynaemisboo
mynaemisboo
Hello! So, about my story, what feedback do you guys have on it? I would like to try and improve on my writing techniques and also see if you guys find the plotline to be good.
mynaemisboo
@Doctor-06 it’s ok, and yes i did see that which is ehy i plan to take my time haha, it’s my first ever fanfic so ig that’s why, i don’t think i will remake any of the chapters but instead leave it be as to see my writing improve as time goes by, i have other stories planned in mind and as for the question with the imps, you will have to read when i post it xD
Doctor-06
@mynaemisboo hello? Um... I kind of like it... very much but there is something that it seems... a little confuse or in... out of tone for a few reasons. Very few actually.... it's like mine. Not much. The book is mainly focus on the plot and the goal of the story. The story is... kind of hasty for me... (which is why I planned to remake my book soon). Not only that... it covers in full mystery and questions. Seems like I must wait.... for the answer. ... Sorry for the bad comment.... but to improve the story and reminded to... continue my work as a writer. And can I ask? Will the protagonist meet the imp heroes again? But as an enemy and hunting her down?
mynaemisboo
Any fellow pvz fans on here? ^^
