mynameisarron

Would anyone want me to update crow boy? I know it's not very good but I was just wondering. 

mynameisarron

Would anyone want me to update crow boy? I know it's not very good but I was just wondering. 

Kit_Kat_97

Hey u told me that my chapter was not convincing. Could u posibly spesify. Thanks for the feed back. I really apreatiate it. Also i started the story when i was younger so it gets alot better in the end.

mynameisarron

@Kit_Kat_97  ok I do really like it its just chronicles of ancient darkness is my favourite book series and when people get stuff wrong I have to correct them .................im weird
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Kit_Kat_97

@anyadreams 
            thank you for the feed back. I will spesify wjat she is using to write. Later on in the book i say its a deerskin journal. She is writing on deer hide. And i will talk about the paint she uses to draw with as her writig tool. Thanks again. In British Columbia on a vacation right now but i will update when i get back.
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mynameisarron

@Kit_Kat_97 and when she fell out the tree she would have prayed for its soul
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