@linsella okay, I just want to say that it was utterly amazing! Like, whenever you described each of the different creatures' habitats like especially the Merrow and the Elves' places of home, I actually felt like I was there, and it felt like I was in the Forbidden Lands myself. That was really cool and I kinda cried in the end when Liam passed away and I dont know why but that's how much I loved it! You've got awesome stuff, friend! Don't stop writing cool stuff like that!