wavesknowshores
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myproximacentauri
myproximacentauri
@MarionAvalon You just used d'you think a whole lot for most of the characters :)
myproximacentauri
@MarionAvalon your story was great! i loved the development of the plot and the overall story, but i did notice that you used overused some phrases. it was great all in all though!
MarionAvalon
@_dustandshadows_ and thanks for all your votes! Glad you enjoyed it! My, you read it all in one day ha ha???
MarionAvalon
Thanks so much! Yes, that's quite possible ha ha d'you think you could give me a few examples? Thanks for the feedback!
MarionAvalon
Hi! Thanks a lot for your vote on No Way in Heaven or Hell! I would love your feedback :-)