Heyoooo sissy ,
I've been totally hooked on your story and I love where it's going! I was thinking it would be really awesome if we could do a read-for-read thing. I'd love to read your new chapters as you post them and give you some feedback, and in return, I'd really appreciate it if you'd take a look at my work and give me some suggestions. It'd be great to have someone to bounce ideas off of and help each other out with our stories. We could motivate each other to keep writing and make our stories even better. What do you say?