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I'm sorry. It's me again but your story is offending to girls everywhere. Honestly, it hurts me that you made her so weak!! If I was the writer of this book, I would find a why to get her friend (don't remember his name) out of the cell and together they run away. And they become badasses. They don't let anyone push them around. And when they get back to the back, she'd rub her sexiness in his face. She's be thinking like "bitch you can't touch all this. You had you're chance you ass but you fucked it up" Oh it'll would be so sweet. But it's your story so you do you.