Hello! ^_^ I hope I don't come off as discourteous, but I'm an aspiring author, and I would like to hear some critique from readers around the world (like you!). Could you please check out my book Unfortunate Girl and advise me on what to do and what not to do by commenting on errors or telling me what I'm good at? Orrrr you could read it for fun, if it's too much work, haha! :P I am in no way promoting my book, however; I just want some good advice on how to improve since I don't get much advice. Thanks in advance if you decide to agree and have a marvelous day! :) ◇Aleena
