mysterioustyles

Please give my book The Storm a read ♥️

mysterioustyles

My recent chapter is getting like really low views and I posted it 2 days ago I am so confused

mysterioustyles

@social_letdown I’m 21 now haha
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mysterioustyles

@social_letdown hi! I know. Keep in mind I wrote it at 14. If I were to rewrite it I’d change many things but it’s special to me nonetheless ❤️ Thank you though!
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social_letdown

genuine constructive criticism, just read some of Stockholm syndrome, it doesn’t really make sense to me :/ your writing jumps back and forth and lingers too much on unnecessary topics whilst being negligent to what should be important topics.
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