Takashiu

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I really hope that she does pull this off because it disrupts the power scale of the elders of the village when they have Danzo as Hokage for 2 months because let me remember it right after pain destroys the village they let danzo become Hokage for good 2 months if I remember it or a month it disrupts a lot of things he's planning to pull because she exposes every dirty little secret to everyone including her army that puts pressure on the leaf they have to worry about now inner conflict and an army that wants the truth to be more out in the village and it's going to make them pay a heavy price and they have to literally apologize to her so they don't fucking lose everything The only ones who might not hear about this is Naruto and kakashi's going to try to keep that secret that the village did something horrible and it's all because of the third Hokage not holding the the proper reins and not giving support to the second Hokage wife clan Dad's That's got to be the most devastating punch to the Kakashi that he is involved in the murder of a clan that had the second Hokage great grandchild including the devastation she was forced to do to save her clan to save them and when that truth is out they have no choice to admit day wronged a lot of people because it's not just information about her clan but everyone else he had ruined it's literally going to be the biggest stain of the village and they have to admit and pay The reputation of their village that they say is squeaky clean and so diverse to realize oh fuck we are no better than the mist village or the cloud village or the Stone Village because it really damages the reputation because this is a diverse territory and this diversity is being shown that it's not it's going to be a punch to the face for the leaf and now they have to admit their done or wrong

mystoriesoc

That comparison to the Mist and Cloud villages is exactly what I was aiming for. The Leaf has spent so long hiding its 'dirty little secrets' under the guise of the Will of Fire, and Kira being a direct descendant of the Second Hokage makes their betrayal of her clan impossible to justify. It’s definitely going to be a massive reality check for Kakashi and Naruto when they realize the village they protect isn’t as 'squeaky clean' as they thought. The elders are used to being able to 'silence' problems, but they can’t silence a revolution that has the receipts. Seeing Danzo and the council have to actually sweat and potentially apologize is going to be a major turning point.
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Takashiu

I'm picturing the weirdest situation thanks to this rogue Village being built and when they ask can I have witnesses for so many crimes and commitments by the villages and everyone including children get out and point the finger at multiple individuals like Danzo friends who might be helped him kidnap children or kill Shinobi who had the Sharingan and those people were witnesses to it and they knew too much that makes the situation more escalant because it shows that the Uchihas and her clan were right to rebel because people were disappearing and being killed even before this ruvolt it also thanks to her all these people would easily get together and gang up on the people who made their lives miserable I bet they left a book if one of them died to say please if you see this person tell them they did this to me so their stories won't die with them it's a literally a positive way of changing the The Villages and put a lot of pressure on former kage and students of them And I bet Naruto is going to be surprised when one of them insults the fifth Hokage calling her an insult because of the 3rd because in the eyes a lot of rogues who from the leaf they might just easily blame the third because they didn't take care of Danzo and other matters and maybe label her the same and making her a little bit upset and a little bit disgusted with her former teacher

Takashiu

I just realized because the scenario she's in as a rogue there's a lot of people who are trusting her and protecting her and making jiraiya's life a miserable hell trying to get information on her in general and her being Senju by blood that just boosts the morale of the rogue Shinobi of her faction I bet the fifth Hokage is going to be a very intense situation including the others when her rogue army shows up and helps a victory happen because if anything happens to her that army is going to turn Right back at them Naruto and Sasuke are deeply wounded not to intervene and Kakashi has to admit a lot of things and the great elders of the village the ones who followed the third Hokage are going to be in a bad scenario because they have to admit they wronged her clan and Uchiha in public and created an entire mess because a lot of those rogues would easily point to the third Hokage council members and there has to be a lot of apologies for those rogues who are just done for corruption they're the ones who pretty much fought to stay alive and keep their morals where most pretty much had to do things they're not proud of because of this these might been former root members who got the thing sealed off their tongue and able to run free or people from the Ambu Black ops who found information that was not supposed to be known and should be eliminated it pretty much brings so much bad blood that the village hidden the leaves have to apologize And they would want their leader freed first hell I would picture most of them saying I will not eat whatever you're feeding us because it might be poisoned because our leader might be treated worse by your hands

Takashiu

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I just realized something my it's going to be hard for the The stone and Cloud Shinobi of rogues never want to go back home because let me just say it they have done a horrible shit to their allies and their own Shinobi child kidnapping for the cloud making them shock troopers in my eyes or experimented on them until they finally got out  and the stone Knowing their Kage game has the biggest criminal history of treachery backstabbing abandoning allies on the battlefield or slitting their throats when they sleep and purges because the most famous thing about the stones Shinobi is their the artistic ideas but there very corrupt involving clan purges like the leaf village but it's more 100% there is no clan because they killed most of them so when we go to those sides and when the stone and Cloud ask for them to come back I think a lot of them are going to say no after the war because they have no trust with that villages

mystoriesoc

I understand your point and I mostly agree  the history of Stone and Cloud explains why many rogue shinobi would never trust their villages again after everything they did like kidnappings, experiments, betrayals, clan purges, and treating their own people as disposable tools. That kind of damage doesn’t fade away. However, I do think some rogue shinobi could come back if the system itself changes meaning the villages openly acknowledge their crimes and remove the Kage and elders responsible. Without real accountability and leadership reform, trust can’t exist, but with genuine change, them returning wouldn’t be impossible.
            
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Takashiu

I do got to say you do a good story And why do I want to ship Itachi in her together pretty much opposites detract pretty much emotions and her pointing out more problems itachi needs to understand She didn't join the Akatsuki for a criminal activities She joined them for revolution and exposing the lies in treachery of the village and others because let's be honest he pretty much brings a good mix to Itachi's loyalty but he never understood why she did it She was justice She had the fourth Hokage ideals He had the thirds because he followed him the most I think that was the problem He never realized what he was protecting and what he allowed to happen you can love your village but you can hate you superiors at the same time and I think itachi needs to realize a big thing he could have done many things different and helped his father maybe talk to him more into protest and more quicker ways to solve the issue without violence and I think that's what the biggest weakness about Itachi He never talked to anyone of his feelings where she was pretty much pushed into a bigger position and let's just say it forced in the harshest scenario where her clan was going to die if she didn't do anything She found out the truth before him and that's why she demanded the scroll back She found out people were dying inside the village by The village that was supposed to protect them

mystoriesoc

I’m glad you understand that their bond is way more than physical attract or unexplicated feelings of love. They shared a painful past inside the same monarchy, they built up diffrent values and idea of what a shinobi should be, Itachi influenced by the hokage, danzo, his clan, to believe that a shinobi should indure pain in silence and lifting burdens alone. While kira swears by the opposit, originaly motivated by the fourth hokage she believes that a shinobi is a honest fighter and one who never gaves up, impossible to silence if the truth must come out. A shinobi who wants peace by harmless methods and connected feelings. You understood itachi’s issue with being quiet all the time, he could’ve had maybe changed his clan’s plans if he just had shared his heart with them.
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Agentshell144

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Agentshell144

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mystoriesoc

@mariaccc144 You're welcome, it's always nice to know that there's other beginner writers trying to make their way just like the older ones did. Its always a bit hard to not compare yourself but remember that they too once were middle school teen writing their stories.
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Agentshell144

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