Hello Mystteria! First of all, it’s really great that you came back to your story after all these years that already shows growth. And honestly, don’t worry about it being ‘cringey’ or cliché. A lot of writers start that way, and what matters is how you develop and refine it now.
If you’d like, I’d be happy to help as you revise. I offer beta reading and editing, so I can give you feedback on your story as well as help improve clarity, flow, and grammar. It could really help you turn this into a stronger, more polished version of your original idea.
