@Jaded_Glory Hey! It's no problem :) I just saw your book, but please dedicate it to me using the dedication button on the right hand side of the options bar. It's the button with the heart on it, then just type in my username there so I'll be able to see it !
Hey can you critique my short story "A Schizophrenic Kiss"? I know my dialogue needs quite a bit of work but aside that I would love to know pros and cons and an overview of sorts! If you can get to it that would be great and much appreciated!
Thanks for your support and lovely comment on my novel Ashes to Embers. I've posted up chapter 2 if you want to keep reading.
I'd be happy to do further critique swaps too if you like. :)