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Did the last chapters ending disappoint? I'm sorry

Super duper random but I just read a webtoon and had a silly idea for the fic I was working on. What if (to make things a bit funner), the reader is introduced to a system of sorts that forces them to optional scenarios ? Or I can just make this into an entirely different fic.
          
          Ex. "Suddenly, a hand grabs your arm—whoever grabbed you had a tough grip, and it didn't seem like they were going to let go. You turned around and without seeing their face, reeled back your first. The system once again popped up with a ping, presenting 3 options.
          
          Combat intent has been detected! Your enemy is "Naruto Uzumaki". Do you :
          a. Punch Naruto --aff ++fear
          b. Dodge his face last second at the cost of your white pants hitting the mud +-aff --dig
          c. Dodge his face at the cost of your dignity. (secret scenario) -+aff --dig --dig
          
          Staring at the screen, and the timer counting down from 15 seconds—you stared up at the very innocent looking boy who had mindlessly grabbed your arm. "Naruto?!"
          
          'And why does that last one minus my dignity twice?!' "
          
          It'll be something like that, or more specifically inspired by RPG Murim Simulator. Tell me your thoughts :⁠-⁠P.

HOLY GOD THAT TOOK WAYYY TO LONG, ANYWAYS HAIIIIII MYUMYURIIII

I'll be taking a break! I've reread all my chapters and realized that it's a bit stiffy and awkward, I've gone into a mindset of confusion and I don't know how to continue. I'll be taking a break to recollect my thoughts.

I was writing! Then I accidentally closed the tab!! My progress!!! My progressss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MYURIMMM my wifi is being replaced rn so i cant leave notes!!! 

Would you guys be fine with a scene where the reader acts a bit crazy for a second? (maniacal grins, crashing out.) It might be cringe but I don't know how else to write it! (⁠｡⁠•́⁠︿⁠•̀⁠｡⁠)

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Updating some of the Naruto chapters. The Gachiakuta chapter im working on is on ~17k words, so i'll try get it to around 20k-25k.

How would you guys feel if I were to add an OC in the "So, be mine." story? They won't be a character involved in going in the animes. More of the person who's been transporting Y/N, etc. I've been wanting to go into a more unique twist for the story, but I'm scared it won't go well.