myykendoll

Review for Beyond the Clouds: 7/10
          
          Advice: 
          
          Use paragraphs. I found it kinda confusing to read since everything was bunched up. 
          
          Stretch out the scenes more. If the scenes are longer, then people would enjoy them more. 
          
          This part is not advice, but it was slightly confusing to read. Other then that, it was good! 
          
          -Emily 

Review for Meadows High School: 5/10
          
          Advice: 
          
          Don't make Mary Sue/Gary Stu OCs. They're characters who are 'perfect'. Most people dislike these characters because it means that the story would be uninteresting and not have a good plot.
          
          Don't make events too cliche. If you make events too cliche, then readers will predict what will happen and thus, the story will become uninteresting.
          
          Take your time writing out scenes. The longer and more detailed a scene is, the better. It will become more interesting if you stretch the scenes out. 
          
          Title is another way to get people reading your story. If a title is boring and cliche, I doubt anyone would be interested. The same with the cover.
          
          If you are able to make a cover or find someone to make a cover for you, then do it! Because a cover attracts readers too. If a cover is plain and boring, it will attract nothing but flies. If a cover is bright and beautiful, it will attract loads of people.
          
          That's all the advice I can give. Good luck on your story! 
          
          - Emily 
          
          

Also can you tell me how you get so many reads and votes? Its awesome how many you get. Any advice it make my story better? I would highly appreciate it. 

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Did People Get Bored Of Meadow High School?
          No One Is Reading It

Hey, I want people to comment on my stories to tell me what I can do better, what u can add too my story or make less of. I would absolutely LOVE to see my stories getting votes and reads. Its like a dream of mine. So please tell me what I can do better.