mzzibizaaa

No problem at all :3

Voyageavecmoi

Thank you very much for all your comments and helpful suggestions on my story. I really appreciate your perspective and you picked up on a lot of the themes and ideas I was trying to explore.

mzzibizaaa

@Voyageavecmoi absolutely! I'd love to do another exchange!
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Voyageavecmoi

@mzzibizaaa Thank you. I'm curious what happens next in Mermentum too. I'd definitely be interested in another exchange if you have time in the future. I'm happy to be helpful as well.
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mzzibizaaa

@Voyageavecmoi I'm so glad I can help! It's a great story. I will actually read more of it, I wanna see what happens next. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my story too! Your feedback is really helpful.
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mzzibizaaa

@ariel_paiement1 hi! I believe the part that I liked the most was the interaction between Gafar and Yazmina. Granted, the last one they had was disgusting( he was drunk and forced himself on her) but this one made up for it, with sincere apologies on Gafar's part and Yaz being able to decide if she wanted to accept or reject his advances another time. This chapter suprised me,too, because I did not think that Gafar would apologize. But I loved it! And I always want to read more. Also: intially, I was against Gafar and Yaz's relationship but after reading this, I started to think that maybe they can work? Or am I kidding myself? What about Fath? Sounds like an epic love triangle.

ariel_paiement1

Lol. Thanks! Oh, there's going to be some problems in store for her with the two different men. She's not exactly in an easy position, but for now, Fath is out of the picture because he's out making his fortune. Lol.
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