@lilacroselsye However, when Pablo begins to believe that Reader has something to do with the accident that killed his wife, that feeling of affection turns into an internal conflict. Pablo does not continue to hurt Reader physically, but emotional abuse begins to appear subtly: a cold tone of voice, inconsistent presence, protection mixed with control and conditional affection. Pablo deliberately made Reader fall in love and eventually married her, with hidden revenge intentions. The first year of marriage seemed perfect on the outside, but on the inside, Reader increasingly lost herself often questioning her faults, enduring physical pain alone, and surviving because Pablo was the only place she depended on. Supporting characters such as Malik, Ariff, Ghaz & Sheila act as Reader's silent protectors and witnesses to Pablo's change. A big fight broke out between Pablo and reader, tragedy repeats itself when accidents happen again. Reader survived, but lost the baby and returned to trauma, her crutch became a symbol of an old wound that never fully healed. Pablo is deeply guilty, yet still deceives himself by treating it all as payment for the past. Until the truth is revealed, the real perpetrator of the first accident was Reader's ex-lover, not Reader herself. Pablo is crushed by guilt and regret. He ends up facing his own guilt not only of blinding revenge, but of the way he hurt an innocent person. Ending: Pablo apologizes for no reason, Reader chooses to forgive without forgetting. The healing process is described as slow and realistic. The story ends with them rebuilding a new life and family not as a redemption, but as an option.
If the you thinks this plot fits your writing style, I don't mind if you want to improvise it, I really appreciate it. Thank you.
