twd_fan98
Hey! So I read your story as requested... Very good!! The plot is good to start and it's not advancing too quickly as that was one of the regrets I have looking back at my story. I made things happen too fast and then it gets boring later on. For you, I suggest maybe drag it out a tiny bit. A little cliffhanger at the end of a chapter, maybe some will they/ won't they stuff you know? But overall great job! Once people find out about this story, your views will skyrocket trust!!
nadiakalel
Thank you so much! This means the absolute world to have someone who's writing I love give me such positive and constructive feedback, I will definitely take this on board as I continue! Thank you again:) x
