Hey I just read your story, and it sounds like it's going to be a great one. Would you mind reading my fanfic and letting me know what you think of it?
Wow your book I Guess is so great, the first chapter I was hooked. I like how you didn't make the main character super perfect because that makes it easier to relate to characters in my opinions. If you space your paragraphs a bit more it'll be easier to read also. Other than that so good and can't wait to read more. :)
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