FreakShow97

Wow your book I Guess is so great, the first chapter I was hooked. I like how you didn't make the main character super perfect because that makes it easier to relate to characters in my opinions. If you space your paragraphs a bit more it'll be easier to read also. Other than that so good and can't wait to read more.  :)
          
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naemac98

thank you so much
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