Ay-hadji
Hello Nafisa as ariagrace said u really do have a great taste... Saw ur reading list too and it was amazing. Suggest some for me?
Ariagrace21
Hey
Hope you're doing great
I checked your reading list and I must say you got a great taste so I was wondering if you like reading dark books you can give a try to my book "Disinclined Mistress" https://my.w.tt/quFafUABfab
Only if it is possible :-)
Ariagrace21
@nafeesaahmad Thank you for the honest views I'll surely edit it and try to make it more clear.
nafeesaahmad
Hi there
Thank you for recommending your book and I checked out a few of your chapters, I’m not really sure how to put this but there was a lot of pronouns and you didn’t real give a whole picture of her home life , it’s like everything is being rushed . You have a great idea of how the image of everything should be but you condensed everything and since it’s from the first person POV , she wasn’t really into the role you made out for her and it felt like she was 6 year old giving everything at once.
As a writer should really go deep into the character as if it were you in her shoe and please don’t take it the wrong way.
Wishing you all the best with your book