Bought PTR Stories, and here's my feedback:
Pleeaseeee:
Proofread.
Bold the dialogues.
Proofread.
No unneccessary fillers.
Proofread.
Determine whose POV.
Proofread.
No rushed chapter.
Proofread.
Minimize plotholes.
Understandable yung mga overpricing niyo kasi PH, right? Pero kung nasunod niyo sana ito, I wouldn't be disappointed and wouldn't be writing this long. I know you know na hindi lahat dito professional writers, but I'm just sayin'.
Improve lang and you'll get there. Thank you sa mga imaginations and creations niyo kasi di ko ineexpect na ganoon yung pumapasok sa utak niyo at that time but all of that, pinatuwa niyo pa rin ako.
Now there are PTRs, in fact, there are other authors, whether short stories, novel, single chapter or special chapters, nagegets ko yung pricing, maximum words na nilagay, pero pulido yung pagkalagay eh, the theme, the characters itself, the setting, the plot, you know, all of the words that came out in that story are like what I really imagine doon sa each and every scenario na iyon. Kuha mo ako eh, kailan updatee sa free-to-read mo dito? Dejok HAHAHA!
Also, the after-sale service is a chef's kiss na rin, thank you malala sa inyo mga authors, especially that one author, for edging me and making me h0rny af, and for sharing the story na rin mismo.
2026 na so dapat 2026 chapters din ang matapos ko sa taon na to, so keep it up peeps, we're just getting started.